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PostSubject: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:50 pm

Basic Information:


Name| Musami, Kunshu
Nicknames/Aliases|The Knight | Monarch | M
Age| 22
Gender| Male

Appearance
An imposing figure standing at 6' 5" and being bulkily built, his body appearing as if he were born a giant, and indeed he was given the genes for his height by his tall father, the infamous Zakuza Musami. He resembles his father in the fact that they both are known to wear heavy armor and are almost never seen without it so the physical details of Kunshu are unknown to anyone but himself, making it difficult to identify him without it.

Kunshu actually has jet black hair that he keeps well cut so that it doesn't interfere with his helmet or build up too much heat within it, and his eyes are a similar shade of black as his fathers are. His skin is naturally a tan shade but due to his habit of never removing his armor, his skin has paled into an unnatural shade of white without the typical sunlight and elements from it. His face is composed of straight features with a blunt nose and flat chin, though his handsome face is rarely seen beneath his helm.

The armor Kunshu typically wears has a very ornate and regal form, while it is inactive, but since he prefers to keep it active at almost all times it is covered in black lightning that would resemble cloth if it weren't constantly moving and jerking about. This makes any features of it impossible to discern, instead he appears to be a walking black lightning storm in human shape, which is typically frightening to his opponents.

Allies are more familiar with this appearance and at times Kunshu may remove the chakra in order to sleep, eat, or similar functions which would be difficult to do with electrical volts coursing around ones body. Thus while his close allies know what his true armor looks like, they are just as clueless as to his true appearance since he sleeps, eats, and bathes with his armor on.

Personality
A man of his height would seem to be of few words, along with his mysterious appearance beneath his hefty armor, but Kunshu is actually not opposed to being vocal when he finds it appropriate among allies, but other than that he fulfills the stereotype, only uttering remarks at opponents or explaining concepts to them so that they understand why their attacks are not working against him.

This is a facet of his most unique quirk, his belief in maintaining a fair fight. Kunshu will avoid overpowering an opponent at all costs, always preferring to give them a fighting chance and often avoiding his most powerful techniques if he doesn't believe an opponent is worth them or able to handle them. Thus even the other members of the Akatsuki have never seen some of his jutsu, since he refuses to waste them on anyone unless he is pushed to the point where he has no other options.

Kunshu is not particularly intelligent and is often lost in simple thoughts such as why his teacup is the shape it is, which might appear as philosophic wisdom to anyone who doesn't know that he's just dense. In combat however, he is remarkably insightful due to training from his father and his ally, Zakuza and Camuraki, who taught him the art of combat extensively. It is one of Kunshu's love, though he does have another.

The enormous iron-man has a love for coffee, which he freshly grinds each day and is rumored to have killed a man for once grinding his coffee for him out of courtesy. He frequently carries a tea cup around that he fills with coffee to drink at any time he's not occupied, and in combat he will sometimes produce a thermos and a cup if he doesn't believe an opponent is worth his time or effort. Naturally his cups are not subject to destruction by his abilities so he has only a few cups, losing one has been known to throw him into a fury that once resulted in the destruction of an entire base.

Kunshu also tends to consider people younger than him to be inferior, as well as women of all sorts, since his chivalrous spirit covers these aspects as well, so he is loathe to fight a woman unless they give him no other option and he refers to all people younger than himself except superiors as 'child'.


Clan Information:

Musami
Founder Unknown
Location Varied [Kiri | Kumo | Free Lance]
Clan: Open, Requires Permission From Owner
Members: None

Clan History
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Believed to have descended straight from Susanoo, originally demi-gods sent down to earth to watch over the god Raiden to ensure that he made proper usage of his powers over thunder and lightning. They were born with blood that coursed with lightning and they were given voices that could boom like thunder from the god in order to convince them to cease their watch over him. They accepted these gifts and once their backs were turned, Raiden turned to churning up a storm of thunder and lightning so powerful that it alerted Susanoo who combated it with his own strength and then, finding the acts of his servants out, he banished them to mortality.

Banished to mortality, the lightning that surged through the clan's veins quickly became a problem and only the discovery of the Musami Stone, centuries later, would give them full and proper control over their powers. The clan's immense power over thunder and lightning are signs of their original sin, and with them they seek to atone for their sins by taking the place of Raiden as best they can in order to appease Susanoo and grant them their immortality back. This has proved to be unsuccessful over the hundreds of years the clan has been in existence.

Kirinogakure, despite being rich with water, is not so rich with storms, due mostly to the quantity and power of the Musami clan which regularly watches for weather irregularities and use their powers to repel or lessen storms. This is also in order to perhaps earn Susanoo's favor by displaying their ability to master their given powers, though some Musami speculate this may actually be counter to his will since he does create those storms in the first place.

The clan, being one of the original clans of Kiri, is simply accepted as a facet of life their and little questions are asked about them, their religious activities, or their livelihood. Similar to Konoha's Uchiha clan, the Musami clan is acknowledged as the iconic clan of the village, though those from Kumogakure have a greater respect for their strength and thus know far more about the clan and its powers. Some clan members have proposed a move to the country, but thus far they have been ignored.

The clan has birthed and been associated with two individuals of great power, having a very close bond with the Oparu clan due to these two individuals, Zakuza Musami and Camuraki Oparu. The Musami, Zakuza, was an infamous Missing Nin of the shinobi world in his time but promptly vanished, along with the Oparu, Camuraki. It is believed regardless of their disappearance that some modern Musami have descended from Zakuza.

Special Abilities

Raiton Affinity
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All Musami clan members are born with the ability to manipulate Raiton with their chakra, due to the fact that their very chakra is actually in an electric form. A Musami clan member cannot lose their Raiton affinity even if suppressed or removed by other jutsu, excluding the use of magnetism to do so. Raiton jutsu used by the Musami clan also cannot be attracted to lightning rods or similar things due to an immense control of their electrical energy to the degree that natural tendencies such as attraction can be negated, though they may move their chakra to the point to give such an appearance if they desire to do so. All Raiton jutsu are considered one rank lower for the purpose of chakra costs due to natural affinity and clan training in control of their talent.

Raiton Chakra
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Musami clan members are born with a very strange form of chakra within their bodies, a type which is constantly in motion, never stationary, making it very difficult for young clan members to form jutsu. Once under control, however, it becomes a powerful asset, unable to blocked through the Tenkutsu like normal chakra (due to the fact that the clan's 'tenkutsu' are under developed to the point of almost absence and that the chakra does not 'flow' like standard forms of chakra barring interruption from closing these points since the chakra simply diverts around it, this act however removes the rank reduction on Raiton techniques the clan usually has), and if drained from the body it inflicts an electrical burn on whatever (or whomever) tried to drain it. Due to this, Musami clan members can only utilize the Raiton element and the appropriate sub-element, Ikazuchi.

When normal chakra would be suppressed or otherwise halted, without special modifications designed to effect the Musami clan's chakra, it is ineffective due to the unusual nature of it. The chakra proves a great risk to the clan member however, as if the chakra system is damaged and the chakra leaks out, it deals lethal damage to the clan member in a body incinerating burst of immense electrical energy. However, the clan has its own genetic way to control their electrical energy. Bodily chakra also has the unusual property of being black in coloration, presumably by the staining of burning itself, so great is its energy. .

Electric Pulse
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Musami clan members electrical body pulses in the nervous system are much stronger than normal, their own bodies being forced to adept to them over time and causing constant pain to clan members. The increased electrical pulses within the body cannot be hindered by effects or jutsu due to their unusually high power without compensating for this effect, thus clan members cannot be afflicted by targeting their nervous system within their body. This works to negate certain medical techniques that target the nervous system, in addition the pulses allow them to constantly be aware of their body since its constantly causing them pain. Genjutsu, therefore, can often be identified as such by a clan member though they are no better able to remove them even if aware of them.

This particular effect on Genjutsu is caused by consistent bodily awareness, attempting to use an illusion of movement on a Musami would be detected since they would be aware that they are not actually moving. Since Genjutsu utilizes the nervous system and typically controls it, however, if the reason for the Musami's awareness is discovered the nervous system can be more effectively manipulated and this effect compensated for, negating this benefit.

Ikazuchi Sub-Element
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The Musami clan is not the only clan capable of creating the immense electrical energy needed to imitate nature's most powerful force, lightning, but they can follow it up with the side-effect, thunder. Thunder, Ikazuchi, is treated as Sound (Oto) element, though it is much more powerful than normal sound waves and is thus treated as one rank higher when compared to the Sound element, such as for clashing with an Oto technique. Other than that, it is the same as Oto with similar weaknesses and abilities.

This new element is generated through the Musami's unique chakra and mastery of Raiton, lightning producing thunder naturally and this ability being taken advantage of by clan members. Ikazuchi is generated usually as a side-effect of an electrical force, but clan members often intend to generate this effect and thus can intentionally utilize thunder for jutsu.

Ikazuchi is automatically a clan members sub-element.

The Musami Stone
Bodily Modification | Chakra Modification
Rank: -

Musami Stone
Quote :
In order to handle and control the great electrical energy housed in a Musami, they have a genetic defect that has evolved into their greatest asset. This takes the form of a stone within their body, whose exact placement depends on the individual, whose origins were that of a simple kidney stone. The kidney stone, however, was revealed to have electrically responsive properties, and research began. The stone was discovered to be capable of channeling and suppressing the clan member's natural chakra, and clan members were quickly injected with a compound that would inihibit the growth of such a stone.

All Musami clan members after the next few generations were simply born with the stone, which varies in size similar to location. The stone is the center of their chakra system, thus their chakra appears very disorganized to those who can see it since it is centered wherever the stone is. Many clan members have it on one side of the body which has noticeably more power than the other side, due to the chakra imbalance. Lucky clan members have their stone in the center and one every few years has one in their heart that makes their system identical to a normal one.

Chakra passes through here and is condensed into a more solid form, though it is still reactive enough to give the user great trouble. Without the stone, the bodily chakra spikes and will incinerate the body, thus they take great care to guard it. The stone is a desirable component for Raiton aligned weapons, so the clan has been thinned by vile ninja who killed members in order to steal their stones. They have since removed their records from all village's access and hidden their clan abilities.

Some clan members have even gone so low as to kill their own clan, and have through this discovered a greater power. When another stone is brought into the body, the two stones react, making the chakra passive like a normal chakra system while keeping all of its properties. This actually increases the chakra amount since it is now condensed, giving them a 50% boost in their own bodily chakra. If a third stone is obtained, the chakra doubles (after the initial gain, thus it is a 50% bonus and then a 100% bonus, not a straight 150%) but inflicts harm on the body and paralyzes the shinobi's muscles as long as the stone remains.

Obtaining another stone requires another character's character to be killed or their body looted and the stone extracted, which must then be installed into the body with a competent medical shinobi (though the stone does not decay rapidly like body parts and allows for some time delay.) The installment and rehabilitation requires a 3000 word topic detailing the installation of the additional stone, accustoming yourself to the new chakra and stone, and the whole topic requires Staff approval to be considered valid and to recieve the benefits from the stone. If the topic is found insufficient, the character's chakra instead destroys the stone and resets the body to its base form, thus adding a third stone is more risky than the second because both could be lost in the procedure with a poor topic.

Clan Techniques

Raiton:
 

Ikazuchi:
 

Kinjutsu:
 

Clan Characteristics:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:50 pm

Rank Information:
Skill Level| S Rank
Ninja Rank| Akatsuki
Village| Kumogakure
Birthplace| Kumogakure; Outskirts



Special Information:

Elements Affinities
    Dominant| Raiton [Lightning]
    Recessive| Ikazuchi [Thunder]

Skill Specialties
    Dominant| Ninjutsu
    Recessive| Weaponry [Piercing]
    Recessive| Weaponry [Exotic]



Special Characteristics:
 

Points and Ryo:

Total| 305
  • Strength| 105
  • Dexterity| 75
  • Stamina| 100
  • Speed| 25


Total Stat Points Earned| 305
Mission Points Earned| -
Ryo| 100,000



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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:00 pm

Justu/Item/Other Information:

Raiton Techniques:
 

Ikazuchi Techniques:
 

Weaponry Techniques:
 

Offensive, Weaponry:
 

Defensive, Weaponry:
 

Summoning Contract:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:11 pm

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Under The Eyes Of A God Unknown
Where Foul Intent Is Far from Known
The Flower Sprouts From Mortal Seed
Not Knowing What It Is To Bleed
Until The Ignorance Starts To Fade
And God Hands You A Blackened Blade
'Raise Your Head, Know Your Fate.'


Under The Eyes of a God Unknown [Birth]

Born from unknown parents, the child that would later grow up to become an infamous name among shinobi was little more than a defenseless runt, born into the Musami clan but found abandoned on the temple altar where he was promptly taken in by the Kumogakure branch of the clan. Normally such an event would result in little concern at the worst and an orphanage at the best, but the child was left on the altar with a visible mark signifying just who he hailed from, a message carved into the stone walls of the temple which still steamed from being cut into it with lightning that directed the elders of the clan to safeguard the child as well as raise him.

The message was carved with a signature as well, but the elders neglected to ever allow the child to view the message and promptly sealed the section of the temple off and built a new portion to replace it, afraid to erase the markings but also not desiring for the young child to get a hold of the information written down into the wall for fear that the young man would emulate his infamous father when the villages needed all the protection they could acquire.

While this was against the wishes of his observant father, he had made a personal point not to interfere in this phase of his life, having worked out a plan for his sons life that required this portion.

Where Foul Intent is Far From Known [Academy]

Raised apart from the other children but not restricted during his free time, Kunshu (as he came to be named, a reference to the 'King' status of his father) was naturally better in his understanding and manipulation of his chakra, though he failed every written test he was subject to during his academy years. He took to chakra control easily however and due to his excellent skills in this department, he was able to bypass the written requirements through a demonstration of his chakra mastery.

Presented to a board of proctors Kunshu proceeded to gather an electrical pulse around his hand and maintain it in a sphere, which was already fairly impressive, but in order to further impress the panel he performed the Thunder Butterfly technique to release a dozen of these creatures, flitting around the room. Impressed by this display of skill, they failed to account that he was still young, and exerting the degree of chakra needed to cause this effect had come at the expense of the time each of them could last.

The resulting explosion blew out the windows and the door of the room as will as resulted in singed proctors who, none the less, passed the young Musami for remarkable skill though he needed a bit more practice in using his chakra more sparingly.

The Flower Sprouts From Mortal Seed [Genin]

As a Genin, and as an effective child prodigy of the Musami clan, though this was expected considering his blood which he was continually kept in the dark about, was deployed on numerous missions, having little time to relax and this quickly took a toll on the young man who progressively became more and more violent due to loss of sleep. It was at this point in time that he was introduced to caffeine through meditative tea leaves, but he found this to be lacking and quickly progressed into harder forms of caffeine and graduated into black coffee.

Due to his natural talent he specialized solely in Raiton techniques, despite his elders insisting otherwise and trying to show him the error of his ways, but he rejected them and began to act on his own, slowly slithering out of their control which greatly alarmed them. In order to create a prodigy level ninja for their own purposes, they needed to ensure that he didn't become like his father, so they pressed further and began to restrict his time even further, disallowing opportunities to consider a life outside of his homeland.

This had the opposite fact, constantly being put out into the field only made him less and less concerned with the village since he was outside of it so often and he increasingly grew annoyed with being commanded by his elders. Due to his frequent activity and overall strength, Kunshu was promoted directly to the rank of Chunnin without forcing him to participate in the exams since it was believed that this would be unfair and his increasingly violent nature would put any competitor at risk.

Not Knowing What It Is To Bleed [Chunnin]

After his promotion, Kunshu was completely fed up with the village elders attempting to manipulate or direct him, and he actively challenged their authority and on his 15th birthday, finally filled to the brim, he outright attacked one of them and pinned him to the ground, drawing a simplistic halberd he'd obtained one of his missions and coursing his chakra through it to slice the man apart, but the material incinerated due to the nature of his chakra and he was quickly pulled away from him.

After this incident Kunshu began to live by himself and fund his own lifestyle, drinking coffee frequently and taking plenty of free time though he found social life difficult since everyone around him was so much weaker than himself in his opinion. He found the village to be hostile and he came to hate everyone knowing his name since they all heard only rumors about him and these made social interactions even more difficult since they expected him to break their necks at any moment.

Agitated with both his clan and his village he returned to his frequent mission-based lifestyle and became a well respected shinobi, though also a feared one, and began to specialize the type of missions he would take, finding it pointless to go on missions where there was no danger, stating that he would only take missions where their was a chance to draw blood from himself.

His strength and talent would earn him the rank of Jounin by the age of 16.

Until The Ignorance Starts to Fade [Jounin]

After achieving the rank of Jounin, Kunshu became more interested in his origins and returned to his clan to determine who his mother and father were, equipped with enough power to force such information out of them if need be. The need became very apparent as the elders refused to relinquish this information to him and his temper flared, causing him to hurl lightning across the entire temple, individually killing everyone of the elders and in his chaotic destruction, he knocked down the erected wall that lead to the chambers where he was initially born.

Instinctively aware that this room held significance since it was hidden inside of the temple and he had never been aware of its existence, he pacified and walked into the room, seeing the altar and examining it closely before his eyes turned to the wall behind it. Seeing the words carved into it, he was scarcely able to believe it so he moved up to touch the wall himself and ensure that it was not some illusion, but it remained firm and repeated uses of 'Kai' did not dispel it. Before he was able to fully read the text and comprehend it however, he heard a voice behind him ask if he liked his handiwork.

Kunshu whipped out his hand, generating black lightning to loose on the interloper who simply caught the electric bolt and hurled it back, burning Kunshu's chest as he took the blow and stumbled back, looking up to see the face and body of Zakuza Musami. Asking if he was done with his little temper tantrum, he identified himself as the father of Kunshu and informed him of the gravity of his current actions, killing so many people would not be looked upon favorably by the village despite the reasoning.

This had not really occurred to Kunshu in his anger, and Zakuza found such a revelation to be a sign of just how poorly the elders had been raising his son. He berated his son for his lack of control and that his power was born into him for destructive purposes indeed, but not so carelessly as to kill ones own family members will no cause besides anger. Kunshu, not quite used to the role of a father in his life, lashed out such speech but soon found himself with a scythe blade pressed up against his neck followed by a command to be silent. It was at this point that another voice spoke up and rudely called that they be on their way before he changed his mind about making these daily trips.

Kunshu, just now discovering how close his father had been to him all his life but yet absent, reacted by grabbing the scythe blade and heating it with his chakra, hoping to melt it and put himself at an advantageous position, at which Zakuza shook his head. He informed his son that the blade was made of iridium and would not corrode with his touch, at which the second voice emerged and concurred, the owner being the equally infamous Camuraki Oparu. Finally at his limit, Kunshu asked what the both of them were doing so close to shinobi when they were both wanted men, at which Iron (Camuraki) responded by saying that he could care less how many people there were and recounted a story of when he'd walked straight through the gates of Konoha using a legal technicality.

However, Zakuza cut him short and said that they could tell stories later, grabbing his son up and carrying him off as Iron followed, though Kunshu protested being lifted so indignantly. Moving out of village territory and country borders, he was set down and told to follow them unless he wanted to go back and explain himself to the village.

And God Hands You A Blackened Blade [Missing Ninja]

The infamous Zakuza and Iron (often known by their street names as Z and Y respectively) took Kunshu to their personal lair, deep within Iron Country, and there it was explained that Kunshu was indeed Zakuza's son and that he was born from the now deceased X of the group, which Iron remarked to with by correcting his partner with 'XXX'. Z retorted to that by saying that if she'd preffered his company he'd be the one with the son, at which point Y leapt at him and the two broke out into what they would call 'civil dueling'. To Kunshu however, it was a horrific sight to see both of these powerful shinobi fighting one another in a flurry of blows, Iron's halberd to Zakuza's scythe, fire and lightning clashing, chain meeting chain, and eventually after they both tired they looked at each other and Y declared that he got one free burn on Z, anytime he wanted, no terms, which was agreed to and they turned their attention back to Kunshu.

Shocked not only by their strength but also by their incredibly lack of professionalism, he asked what exactly was the point of them taking him with them, to which Y responded by saying that it wasn't his idea and that 'I would've killed your arrogant little shit ass but Z has an issue with killing his own kids.' Z shushed him and explained that his actions had branded Kunshu as a Missing Nin and that the only option he had to save his life was to take him away. Knowing what his sons next questions would be Z explained his reasoning for leaving him with the village.

If Z had personally raised him, then he would never have had the choice of what he wanted to do with his life, and he would never deny his son the choice to do what he wanted, also, since he held two Kekkei Genkai through transplant, his Musami skills were rusty, and therefore he likely couldn't educate him properly in his abilities, so he'd instructed the elders to do so on his orders. He said that as Y had stated, they stopped in for visits daily through an assigned seal and his actions today would've ended poorly if they hadn't made such visits part of their schedule.

With this explanation offered Kunshu didn't press for much more information, considering the rest trivial, and with his introduction to his new dysfunctional family he felt content. Z told him that he had only one condition, that Kunshu could stay with the two of them for one year and train, but after that he would have to depart and seek his own. This condition was accepted and with that, the end of his first day lead to many others until the year faded away almost as quickly as it had come and being gifted with various pieces of equipment and the knowledge of two masters, Kunshu was released into the shinobi world as a Missing Ninja.

During this period of time, Kunshu gained his summoning contract, through work with his two effective senseis who also utilized insect based summonings, though he would end up using neither of their species and instead using his own. While both Y and Z were specialists in utilizing their summoning affinity, Kunshu did not have enough time training with them to gain this trait as well, though he gained a very firm grounding in the art.

'Raise Your Head, Know Your Fate.' [Akatsuki]

Working free-lance for a period of time as a hit-man, Kunshu was able to support himself and the lonely lifestyle of just work and no play was something he was comfortable with since it was the kind of life he lead all of his life except for his year with Y and Z. His skill level was noteworthy and he soon came to be considered on the same level as his two mentors, earning the name of K though he refused to use it for he felt it was disrespectful to consider himself on the level of his own father.

He was scouted out by the Akatsuki, a position extended to himself which Kunshu was reluctant to accept at first until it was mentioned that there was a boundless supply of coffee, which won over the coffee-loving shinobi into the folds of the organization, though he is still a fairly new recruit, only a month old or so and his tendency to go out on missions frequently has meant that few in the base know him very well beyond the fact that he is a member and is present.


Roleplaying Sample:
 

Public Profile

Name: Monarch
Appearance:
Village: Kumogakure
Organization: Akatsuki
Rank: S
Age: 22
Info:

  • Former Kumogakure
  • Heavy Armor
  • Halberd User
  • Physically Strong
  • Minimal Speed
  • Raiton Specialist


Those within Kumogakure are aware of the above information, or those who resided in Kumogakure originally, since Kunshu is a well known figure there as the son of Zakuza. Those outside of Kumogakure are usually only aware that he is listed in the Bingo Book, but since this information was logged before he obtained his current armor plate, it depicts his appearance as he is without his armor, which effectively puts him off the records to anyone who is not familiar with the bounty hunting business or the world of Missing Nin.


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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:29 pm

This application is complete, I believe this should be up to S Rank snuff' but if anything looks sparse just let me know and I'll be sure to correct it to be lengthier or to provide more details. The history concerning Y and Z is a tribute to my own and my brothers former characters so some it probably wont make sense, nor do I tend to make use of either of those characters, they are strictly for history purposes.
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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Fri Dec 03, 2010 11:21 am

Sorry, forgot a summoning contract, put this back on hold for a little bit.
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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:28 pm

Alright, that'll be all.
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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Sun Dec 05, 2010 10:11 am

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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:30 pm

As much as I hate to say it, I cant find anything wrong with this application.

The only thing I DID find is your Black Lightning Sphere needs to have a post count since that is specified in the description, or the amount of hits it can take.

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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:51 pm

Modified into the following:

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Name of Jutsu: Black Lightning Sphere
Rank: B
Users: Clan | Musami
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Raiton
Description: The user gathers electrical chakra over their entire body, singing their own hair, before dispersing it outwards in the form of a solid ball of electrical energy. Unlike most defensive techniques, this jutsu is designed to remain for more than a post or more than one hit, being a few centimeters thick with pure electricity (lasting up to three posts or until a cumulative B Rank amount of damage is inflicted on it). The sphere moves with the user, enabling them to move into combat without fear of incoming attack and due to the speed of lightning, the sphere remains even if they use Shushin or other fast techniques. The dome prevents contact with an opponent physically however, so jutsu are typically used which can originate from the sphere itself rather than the user if desired and the jutsu are of the Raiton element.
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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:54 pm

Aight. I really, really, REALLY hate you.

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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:55 pm

Actually, requires Gn's approval for Akatsuki. ^^;; Silly me

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PostSubject: Re: Musami, Kunshu [Complete]   Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:56 pm

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