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PostSubject: Beast Collection [Mission]   Fri Dec 17, 2010 7:51 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Beast Collection [Mission]   Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:07 pm

Time Efficacy: E
-Simple and plain, it took you guys one month. Also you spent a lot of time doing things that didn't need to be done. For instance the part with the ferry and the talking when tenting. Had the posts been strictly travel without all the extras this grade would be higher.

Comprehension and Execution: B
-Pretty average here. It was pretty good for the most part, though I do think the execution could have been a bit better, some of captuers were very simple minded, no offense.

Creativity: C
- You could have been a lot more creative. Using bunshin, kage bunshin, and stuff would have been more ninja like. Mitsu couldve strengthened his bones and played a more offensive role with the captures, especially with the croc.

Evidence and Collateral: B
- There seemed to be a lot of evidence left behind during each execution. First off there was the rock slide down the cliff and some kunai with tags used for the crocodile. During the snake part, the snake tore through the trees and left behind a lot of broken branches. Then there was the hare left behind after the mountain lion. There would have been footsteps left behind in the snow although this isn't entirely something that can be helped. Then theres burn marks from building fires during the times they tented. Besides all this, both didn't seem to check if they left any supplies behind as they went (note the kunai with the crocodile). Otherwise, the tent was packed away every day and no other supplies (sleeping bags, cloaks) were left behind.

Quality: C
- Good enough but not stellar.

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